Second Life's Revenge

«What do you have to say for yourself, sister?» Tine Alvarado looked down at the small... Read more «What do you have to say for yourself, sister?»Tine Alvarado looked down at the small girl whose body was covered with scars. The small girl looked at her hands trembling while all eyes were on her. She didn’t understand why this was happening to her, nor didn’t understand how this all happened.«It’s not my fault.»«Laura Alvarado the jury has decided to execute you as you have attempted to murder your own sister who is the fiancee of the second prince. And hereby you are found guilty and the court shall be adjourned.»Just like that her life had ended after being falsely accused. Not until she had gone back to life. A second chance to live.And her second life’s revenge. Collapse Reincarnation, Revenge, Magic, Romantic Subplot, Aristocracy, Empires, Kingdoms, Female Protagonist, Second Chance Good story horrible sentence structure like every 3rd or 5th sentence made it feel like the author skipped a ton of important or at least needed info or dialogue. Like it skipped from the (spoiler) second guy attacking her at the masquerade to her waking up from the injury, like no info at all on what happens after the attack or how she got to the palace afterwards etc.. I read till ch. 26 before dropping. The story is a good premise but the writing is not that good. The author seems to be a beginner but they did what they could. The progression of the story felt too unnatural Interesting story. Love how it ended. Though with regards to Laura's biological parents left me hanging. :( "Second Life's Revenge" is a short story ideal to pass the time.While there are some holes in the plot and it's a bit cliché, the story plays out quite well. There is revenge, empowerment, friendship, magic and romance, so if that is what you are looking for, I recommend that you read it.I give it 3 stars.